It's a start, but the lines are really scratchy and the animation seems unnatural. Still, ive seen much worst firsts and considering that you're using pivot you ought to be able to develop your skills to a good standard.
agree with Charles Burdett, you comment on other peoples animations when you cant even make a decent one yourself, your such a put down and shouldn't even be allowed to animate. you cant even make correct movements, your using pivot, and your a jerk. you wanna be real animator, use flash, not childish stuff.
guys!!!! stop being such pricks!!! it doesnt have 2 make sense!! do u expect me 2 make a big ass story line or somthing!?!?!?!?!?!?!? u guys dont make story lines either!! all story lines do is make u waste a couple days!!!!!